First Chapter Critique Service!

We can help you to make your words leap off the page

We can help you to bring your text to life with vivid characters, situations, and descriptions that leap out from the pages. The issues that we identify with writing are not the sign of a bad writer. It simply means that the writer has yet to discover the simple techniques that will make the text more compelling. Our promotional price is just $200 for a first chapter of up to 3000 words. It is an investment that will do more than help you to improve your book. It will help you to rapidly develop as a writer.

 Unlock the magic
in your writing 
to make your book sparkle from the very first chapter! 

​​You can apply our advice to your first chapter and use those improvements as a blueprint for the whole book. If you feel you need more help, remember that the Magic Sparkle can also provide chapter-by-chapter or whole-book advice, as well as author mentoring services. 




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Try our in-depth 'Chapter One' service for only $200. 
(usually $299)
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The first chapter of your book is the most important. It is the chapter that will determine if your readers are going to stay with you or move onto another book. If you can get that first chapter right, you have the formula to get the other chapters right!  

The Magic Sparkle 'Chapter One Critique Service' identifies the ways that you can improve your writing, highlighting problem areas and making practical suggestions. Whether you have finished your book and feel that you need help to get it ready for publication, or if you have only written the first chapter, we can help you to make your writing sparkle! Our service puts a fresh pair of eyes on your first chapter with practical advice and solutions.

Our Chapter One service clearly identifies issues with the writing, with suggestions that may include guidance to:  

• Develop pace
• Build dramatic tension  
• Make the writing more active
• Improve dialogue
• Develop characters
• Create vivid descriptions
• Make the most of key moments
• Address too much 'telling'
• Eliminate wordiness
• Remove vagueness
• Replace overused adverbs, adjectives, and cliches with powerful writing

​For a free consultation
about your book project,
call Trevor on
404-358-0193
or use the contact form.